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It's been five generations after the first war between Samurai and Shinobi. The five villages were founded shortly after and there has never been a war between them. Until now, all five villages have been off limits to the outside world, however the gates have been opened and ninja were allowed to travel between. But suddenly, kage are falling ill and no one knows who's behind it. The Hokage and Raikage both lie in comatose state, awaiting an answer as to what put them there.
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Kritika Hyuuga

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1 Kritika Hyuuga on Mon Dec 15, 2014 9:45 pm

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Konoha Genin
Konoha Genin

General Info
Name: Kritika
Nicknames: Tika,Shino
Gender: Male,Heterosexual
Age: 14
Clan: Hyuga
Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank:  Genin
Element: Lightning

Looks:
Height: 5"11
Weight: 109 ibs
Image: Nope.
Description: Kritika is always seem wearing a wool red scarf. His hair is a light brown,spiky hair going down the side. Kritika is known as skinny for his age,but is the average height for his age. Kritika has a semi-long nose,and a pretty generic face. He has a short,straight neck. Kritika wears a brown coat and blue skinny jeans.Under the coat  a white T shirt. He wears black boots.



Personality:
Nindo:  "As an Hyuuga,I`ll break this worlds curse!
Personality Description: Kritika s normally a closed-off person, often coming off cold or even scary to some to the point that most would just avoid him, he prefers to spend time alone, thinking, meditating or taking walks around the hidden leaf at night. While fighting, he doesn't show much, normally preferring to finish a fight quickly or stopping a fight before it even begins, he's not afraid to fight but prefers not to, instead prefers to talk his way out a fight instead of engaging head on.

But once people get to know Kritika better, he is a warm and caring individual, willing to die for the few friends he has then to let them and the people counting on him down. He'll speak calmly, keeping his own torment inside himself so people don't worry about him, although he may go wild with his emotions if he's broken down enough, going either into a fit of rage or a fit of despair, crying over that which made him sad or upset.

He's also paranoid to some extent but for the most part, he keeps it to himself but gets worried easily and will be the first to suspect something has gone wrong with something or someone.

He is also a keen intellect, able to analysis opponents and determine the best way of dealing with the situation and is adaptable to the ever changing battlefield that he fights in, making use of diversions and his other techniques to throw off opponents to get a opening to strike in.
Favorites: Kritika hates sweets,as they rote his teeth. He also is portrayed to like spicy and healthy foods. He hates the occasional fangirls,which annoy him. He hates unhealthy and loud people.

Background:
History: Kritika was born in the Hyuuga mansion as a quiet baby,just like other Hyuuga. His parents died in battle against an Uchiha when Kritika was just 2. Kritika has since then been an orphan. He has been attacked many a times for his eyes,but Kritikq was trained to fight back. As a young child,Kritika was treated badly by his fellow orphans and beat. He doesnt regret it,because it has helped him learn to endure pain because of this.

At the age of 8,Kritika was set free from the orphanage. The hokage had gave him enough money for an apartment,food,and water. 8 weeks later,Kritika decided to join the Ninja Academy. There,he was fangirled like the legendary Sasuke Uchiha years ago. At the academy,Kritika discovered he had amazing nin and taijutsu skills. His teachers noticed this,and let him graduate early.

Ever since these events,Kritika has been known as strong genin within Konoha.He still occasionally visits the Hyuuga Mansion,where his fellow Hyuuga  greet him.
Key Events: Parents death,graduating academy early.
Writing Sample: (from my naruto legacy character)
Surai Activated his Byakugan, scanning the environment before deactivating it just as quickly, conserving his energy. "There are three targets approaching from the west at fast speeds. They should be here within ten minutes" he informed his mock team for the simulation. "Tanken, stay on the ground and draw them into Taijutsu, and focus their attention onto you" said person nodded. "Hori, stay atop the trees, keep them at a range. I want you to lay a Genjutsu over them to slow their perception of time, overlay it with another if you have to. Give some ranged support with Shurikenjutsu, but conserve your Chakra in case we are Injured." She gave an affirmative. "I will stay in the shadows and attack their flanks once they are engaged, and take them out quickly". At this they all Dispersed, and set to their tasks.

Soon the other squad was upon them, and they two of them engaged Tanken below in Taijutsu, while their other Comrade went through handsigns preparing a Jutsu. Surai quickly came upon him, disrupting his Chakra System and leaving him unable to fight. His teamates did not notice, as they were having trouble landing a hit on Tanken due to the Genjutsu that slowed their perception, so Surai prepared the next phase of their plan.

"Byakugan" Surai whispered, feeding Chakra towards his Eyes. He quickly took his enemies Chakra systems into consideration, Cataloging the Location of their Tenketsu points, and then he jumped onto the forest floor below. "You are within range of my Divination. 8 Trigrams, 32 Palms" He spoke aloud, frightening his opponents even more. He dashed in, closing their Tenketsu, leaving them severely weakened. He then used the Gentle Fist and neutralized them before his allies joined him on the forest floor. Surai walked over to one of them and opened one of his pouches, taking a scroll. He opened it and read the contents. "Hmmm.... it seems we are to report to the third tower of the cliff and report our 'Mission', and then go and relieve the defending force at the ravine." he burned the scroll with a very low level Kaaton Jutsu. "Take a Minute to recuperate, and then we'll be setting off." He smirked slightly. This mock simulation had been a radical success, and that was expected. He had honored his Clan, and proved their superiority. His father would be pleased, and he was one step closer to his goal, as far away as that was...

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2 Re: Kritika Hyuuga on Mon Dec 15, 2014 10:34 pm

I feel history should be longer but whatevs... Approved unless someone else has a comment.

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