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Kritika`s custom jutsu

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1 Kritika`s custom jutsu on Fri Dec 19, 2014 2:19 am

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Name: Lightning Style: Thunder Clap
Rank: D
Type: Passive Offensive,Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: 20 meters
Duration: 2 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger->Monkey->Boar
Description: The user creates a massive clap of thunder overhead that is designed to intimidate the opponent or at least make them frightened enough to force an opening (i.e. jumping at the sound). An alternate use of the jutsu is to mask the sound of something else moving, which may be useful for stealth etc. When used by one who has mastered this jutsu, it can cause a temporary deafening of those near the user.
Weakness: If not used properly (overusing the technique by using it 4 times in one topic),it could temporarily deafen the user (5 posts). If used in a high wind area,the jutsu will instantly be cancelled out as well.

Name: Lightning Style: Burst
Rank: B
Type: Offensive,Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 3 Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: The user absorbs all B-ranked lightning jutsu and below within a 10 meter radius. After absorbing all the lightning they can,the user will let out all the lightning,which burst and hit everyone around the user.
Weakness: The user may not move while using the jutsu.

Name: Lightning Style: Static String Technique
Rank: C
Type: Can be used as both defense and offense,Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: 10 meters,20 meters for ninja with puppet mastery adept 1 and above.
Duration: 6 posts max.
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger-Dragon-Tiger-Boar
Description: The user creates electric strings that connect to the user`s fingers. The user can control the strings how ever they like. The strings will inflict minor shocks on anyone it touches. It can also be used as a D-ranked lightning whip.The strings can be used properly by puppet masters,but can still be used by none puppet masters.
Weakness: The shocks are so little that they will only distract or annoy the enemy and will only do little to no damage.

Name: Gentle Fist: 5 Years in Hell
Rank: B
Type: Offensive,Nintaijutsu
Element: None
Range: 1 Meter
Duration: 3 Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: The user goes into the byakugan state and changes into the Hyūga stance. The user then charges at the enemy with an onslaught of gentle fist attacks. The user will then attack all chakra points of the user,and end it with a final gentle fist attack.
Weakness: The attack can be blocked or cancelled with b rank or higher elemental jutsu.

Name: Gentle Fist: Heaven`s Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive,Nintaijutsu
Element: None
Range: 10 meters
Duration: 4 posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: Dragon-Dog-Tiger-Dog-Boar-Rabbit
Description: After performing the handsigns,the user will rush forward with their palm. Hitting the enemy or not,a white beam will shoot out of the users hand,straight forward. It travels at the medium speed of a intermediate taijutsu user.The attack will do extra damage if the palm hits. Normally,the beam will deal a great amount of brusies and maybe a broken bone. (the beams damage plus a simple gentle fist attack`s damage)
Weakness: The beam is narrow and the direction may not be altered.



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2 Re: Kritika`s custom jutsu on Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:36 am

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All seem good except thunderclap and electric strings..
For thunder clap, what do you mean by if not used properly..
For electric strings. For offensive, are they used as whips and how can they be used to defend? Are they meant to block attacks? If yes, what type of attacks.


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3 Re: Kritika`s custom jutsu on Fri Dec 19, 2014 10:03 am

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Edited.


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4 Re: Kritika`s custom jutsu on Fri Dec 19, 2014 12:32 pm

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Ok so you did almost all the edits i requested in chat. The last jutsu still needs some damage discription, broken bones? Bruises? Cracked bone? Exactly what damage does it do, for both the strike and beam please. Also, use taijutsu level for speed reference, not 150 mph

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5 Re: Kritika`s custom jutsu on Fri Dec 19, 2014 6:57 pm

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