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1 Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 1:31 pm

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Armor Name: Kuiyeoung
Armor Rank: A
Armor Piece: Torso (Cloak with hood)
Armor Ability: Mojingan: On the hood, there are two symbols, placed on either side of the hood, almost like eyes. (See picture below) They represent the three great Dojitsu, being minor in the manners it is use. As this is a piece attached to Kaseki's main frame, this is an extension of his body. As a result, he is able to see through the symbols on the item, much like the Rinnegan. However, unlike the great eyes it represents, it provides no knowledge of jutsu like the Sharingan, to Kaseki.
Reform: The cloth itself it able to grow threads and self repair itself. It can
Ability Ranks: D, C
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Owner: Kaseki
Cost: 3000 Ryo



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2 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 1:58 pm

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You need a much more descriptive... Erm... Description. Specify size, weight, and be more clear on what it looks like and what part of the image is the puppet.

Also: Go into depth on the Mojingan Seal. If it is a jutsu or something similar, you will need to register it first.


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3 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 2:09 pm

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I wasn't done yet... lol, I was reading into the rules to fix this. XD

4 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 3:10 pm

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My apologies, it didn't have a WIP tag


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5 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 3:42 pm

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My bad

6 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 4:28 pm

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After thinking about it...

I'm just going to turn this into an armor.

7 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 4:57 pm

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In the description you still mention it being a puppet. Once you get that taken care of, specify where the symbols are on the hood and it looks good to me. Also, unless you can only have one ability on a B-Rank (I don't feel like checking lol) you could lower this to B-Rank and it would be cheaper. At A-Rank, cost is 3k


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8 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:00 pm

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But it's A-Rank?

9 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:05 pm

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I was saying it didn't HAVE to be A-Rank cuz A-Rank is more expensive. But I was wrong, B-Rank can only have one ability.

SO: Price it at 3000 (seems like a lot to me but that's what the rules say) and its approved.


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10 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:16 pm

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done.

11 Re: Kuiyeoung on Tue Dec 23, 2014 5:58 pm

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