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It's been five generations after the first war between Samurai and Shinobi. The five villages were founded shortly after and there has never been a war between them. Until now, all five villages have been off limits to the outside world, however the gates have been opened and ninja were allowed to travel between. But suddenly, kage are falling ill and no one knows who's behind it. The Hokage and Raikage both lie in comatose state, awaiting an answer as to what put them there.
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1 - on Mon Dec 29, 2014 4:39 pm

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2 Re: - on Mon Dec 29, 2014 6:19 pm

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You are going to need to describe the strength of the arrows and the abilities of each element of arrow.

Also, if they are what i think they are, you will probably need to bump the rank.


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3 Re: - on Mon Dec 29, 2014 6:21 pm

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Couple more things:

Can't use elements you don't have.

If it is generating chakra arrows you need to have a chakra cost.


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4 Re: - on Mon Dec 29, 2014 6:43 pm

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Bump and the strength & chakra coat ill put in the techniques i creat

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5 Re: - on Mon Dec 29, 2014 7:11 pm

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Honestly, you are going to need to redo almost everything on here. You need to put in some serious detail. Something like a paragraph per element.

Also, unless it can't shoot arrows at all without techniques, you still need a chakra cost.


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