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1 MINES[jutsu] on Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:22 am

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Name: Raiton Golem
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive/defensive/Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 25m
Duration: Lasting
Hand Seals/Charge up: Hare, ram, bird.
Description: This technique allows dray to create a large, humanoid creature, three times the size of an
average man, composed of lighting from atmospheric currents. The golem must be within twenty-five metres or less of dray or else it will dissipate and will always possesses an ample amount of brute strength and it's body radiates with electricity. The golem is very durable, making it ideal whether it be serving as
additional support or simply as a mobile shield. It is twenty feet tall and two feet wide. The golem can strike the ground to send a burst of electricity moving at taijutsu master speeds towards the opponent within 20m. The attack can be co-ordinated by the user. The golem can also send little bursts of stunning electricity that stun the opponent for one post.
The golem is as physically strong as a taijutsu master.
One S-ranked techniques is required to destroy the golem.
Weakness: Due to the golem's sturdy structure, it moves at taijutsu basic speed depending on strength rather than speed. The normal chakra for S-ranked techs for jounin is required.

Name: Beasts of heaven
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive/defensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 15m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Boar,bird,snake.
Description: Performing the required handseals, dray channels his raiton charge from within and out of his hands to from two tigers of raiton from each hand. This tigers run towards the target in a zig zag manner and at taijutsu adept speeds. This tigers are kill to death. They chase their target to death until they are destroyed. If they catch up with him/her, they will bite and send all the electricity within them into the target.
Defensively, dray can send them out of his hands but still have their raiton tail attached to his hand like a leash. This tigers would circled in front of dray like a shield to block incoming attacks.
weakness:they tigers are just the size of big cats not actual tigers and b rank and above jutsu would destroy them.



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2 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:27 am

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Draygglez wrote:Name: Raiton Golem
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive/defensive/Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 25m
Duration: Lasting
Hand Seals/Charge up: Hare, ram, bird.
Description: This technique allows dray to create a large, humanoid creature, three times the size of an
average man, composed of lighting from atmospheric currents. The golem must be within twenty-five metres or less of dray or else it will dissipate and will always possesses an ample amount of brute strength and it's body radiates with electricity. The golem is very durable, making it ideal whether it be serving as
additional support or simply as a mobile shield. It is twenty feet tall and two feet wide. The golem can strike the ground to send a burst of electricity moving at taijutsu master speeds towards the opponent within 20m. The attack can be co-ordinated by the user. The golem can also send little bursts of stunning electricity that stun the opponent for one post.
One S-ranked techniques is required to destroy the golem.
Weakness: Due to the golem's sturdy structure, it moves at taijutsu basic speed depending on strength rather than speed. The normal chakra for S-ranked techs for jounin is required.
"How strong is it physically?"
Name: Beasts of heaven
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive/defensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 15m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Boar,bird,snake.
Description: Performing the required handseals, dray channels his raiton charge from within and out of his hands to from two tigers of raiton from each hand. This tigers run towards the target in a zig zag manner and at taijutsu adept speeds. This tigers are kill to death. They chase their target to death until they are destroyed. If they catch up with him/her, they will bite and send all the electricity within them into the target.
Defensively, dray can send them out of his hands but still have their raiton tail attached to his hand like a leash. This tigers would circled in front of dray like a shield to block incoming attacks.
"Weakness? Bump to B rank. What can destroy the tigers? Are they the size of two fully grown tigers?"

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3 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Fri Jan 09, 2015 10:29 am

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4 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Fri Jan 09, 2015 12:15 pm

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Use tai tier for strength.
2: Wut? Logic states that C vs C would nullify each other, in other words, destroy them and itself. B would destroy them and pass through to do even more damage. Make it B

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5 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Fri Jan 09, 2015 12:29 pm

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Draygglez wrote:Name: Raiton Golem
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive/defensive/Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 25m
Duration: Lasting
Hand Seals/Charge up: Hare, ram, bird.
Description: This technique allows dray to create a large, humanoid creature, three times the size of an
average man, composed of lighting from atmospheric currents. The golem must be within twenty-five metres or less of dray or else it will dissipate and will always possesses an ample amount of brute strength and it's body radiates with electricity. The golem is very durable, making it ideal whether it be serving as
additional support or simply as a mobile shield. It is twenty feet tall and two feet wide. The golem can strike the ground to send a burst of electricity moving at taijutsu master speeds towards the opponent within 20m. The attack can be co-ordinated by the user. The golem can also send little bursts of stunning electricity that stun the opponent for one post.
The golem is as physically strong as a taijutsu master.
One S-ranked techniques is required to destroy the golem.
Weakness: Due to the golem's sturdy structure, it moves at taijutsu basic speed depending on strength rather than speed. The normal chakra for S-ranked techs for jounin is required.

Name: Beasts of heaven
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Used For: Offensive/defensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 15m
Duration: 1post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Boar,bird,snake.
Description: Performing the required handseals, dray channels his raiton charge from within and out of his hands to from two tigers of raiton from each hand. This tigers run towards the target in a zig zag manner and at taijutsu adept speeds. This tigers are kill to death. They chase their target to death until they are destroyed. If they catch up with him/her, they will bite and send all the electricity within them into the target.
Defensively, dray can send them out of his hands but still have their raiton tail attached to his hand like a leash. This tigers would circled in front of dray like a shield to block incoming attacks.
weakness:they tigers are just the size of big cats not actual tigers and b rank and above jutsu would destroy them.
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6 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Tue Jan 27, 2015 10:29 am

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Name: Lightning release: Four pillar prison
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 50X50
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare
Description: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, which then shoot bolts of lightning between them, immobilising the target and possibly doing damage to them.
Weakness: N/A


Name: sharingan
Rank: B
Type: All
Element: N/A
Range: short-10m
Duration: 3posts maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: contact
Description: This is simply the generic use of genjutsuas employed by Sharinganwielders. By establishing direct eye contact with the intended opponents, the user can lock them within a genjutsu of their choosing in order to achieve various effects. These effects range from inducing instantaneous, but temporary, unconsciousness in an opponent to forcefully extract any valuable information that they possess controlling their actions or to show memories.
Weakness: N/A

Name: Control
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/all
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Duration: 3 posts, Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Snake, Ox, Tiger, Bird, Hare, Boar.
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb any lightning jutsu directed at him or her, save it up for use within three posts or expel it in any direction.
Weakness: Can't absorb S-rank jutsu. Only three lightning jutsus can be absorbed.

Name: Living Dead
Rank: S
Type: Kinjutsu/All
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Duration: 5 posts, maintable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Ox, Boar, Snake, Dog, Hare, Bird, Ox, Hare, Snake, Tiger, Ram, Boar, Snake.
Description: Performing the necessary handseals, the user can postpone the use of this jutsu till when opportuned. Upon contact with a target, the user can absorb this target into himself. The target absorbed lives unconsciously inside the user and can be ejected at any time for any reason. Everything the target has still remains with it after being absorbed. It's more like they are transferred to a different compartment within the user and not dead exactly.
Weakness: Only dead targets can be absorbed. Number of targets absorbed at a time can just be two. The number of target living in the absorption compartment cannont be more than five. Either one target is ejected to let another come in.



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7 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Wed Jan 28, 2015 1:04 am

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8 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 1:31 pm

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9 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 3:19 pm

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Draygglez wrote:
Name: Lightning release: Four pillar prison
Rank: S A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu/Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 35m
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare
Description: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, which then shoot bolts of lightning between them, immobilising the target and possibly doing damage to them.
Weakness: N/A

"Don't alter Wikipedia ranges unless it is a huge issue, it says all, change range accordingly.


Name: Coercion sharingan
Rank: C
Type: offensive
Element: sharingan should be N/A
Range: short-10m
Duration: 2posts maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: contact
Description: With a glance of the Sharingan, this technique forces a nightmarish genjutsu on the victim, overpowering them and bringing them to their knees.
Weakness: N/A

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Genjutsu:_Sharingan Swap out the description and name of the technique, this is the same thing. Reistance against the Genjutsu should be based on the target's Genjutsu level however. <- Add that bit in

Name: Control
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/all
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Duration: 3 posts, Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Contact
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb any lightning jutsu directed at him or her, save it up for use within three posts or expel it in any direction.
Weakness: Absorbing S rank lightning will render the user unable to use non- lightning techniques for two posts. No absorbing S-Rank jutsu. This needs a trigger, so you can't just passively absorb lighting even if you don't expect it, preferably hand seals or holding one hand seal during the whole instant the jutsu is hitting you. Needs a limit to how many lightning jutsu can be "stored" at a time.

Name: Living Dead
Rank: S
Type: Kinjutsu/All
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Duration: 5 posts, maintable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Ox, Boar, Snake, Dog, Hare, Bird, Ox, Hare, Snake, Tiger, Ram, Boar, Snake.
Description: Performing the necessary handseals, the user can postpone the user of this jutsu within it's duration. what? Upon contact with a target, the user can absorb this target into himself. The target absorbed lives unconsciously inside the user and can be ejected at any time for any reason. Everything the user target? has still remains after being absorbed. It's more like they are transferred to a different compartment within the user and not dead exactly.
Weakness: Number of targets absorbed at a time can just be two. The number of target living in the absorption compartment cannont be more than five. Either one target is ejected to let another come in. this should only be usable on dead bodies, I don't see it specified anywhere. If usable on live people it needs to have sustained contact for like a three seconds. Even then I will put this on the fence due to similarities to Kamui.


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10 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 5:16 pm

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lets make four pillar bind 50x50 range actually

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11 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 5:57 pm

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Name: Control
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/all
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Duration: 3 posts, Maintanable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Contact
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb any lightning jutsu directed at him or her, save it up for use within three posts or expel it in any direction.
Weakness: Absorbing S rank lightning will render the user unable to use non- lightning techniques for two posts. No absorbing S-Rank jutsu. This needs a trigger, so you can't just passively absorb lighting even if you don't expect it, preferably hand seals or holding one hand seal during the whole instant the jutsu is hitting you. Needs a limit to how many lightning jutsu can be "stored" at a time.

Im gunna deny this one. Only way for you to be 'storing' jutsu is to actually store them fuinjutsu

Name: Living Dead
Rank: S
Type: Kinjutsu/All
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Duration: 5 posts, maintable
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ram, Ox, Boar, Snake, Dog, Hare, Bird, Ox, Hare, Snake, Tiger, Ram, Boar, Snake.
Description: Performing the necessary handseals, the user can postpone the user of this jutsu within it's duration. Upon contact with a target, the user can absorb this target into himself. The target absorbed lives unconsciously inside the user and can be ejected at any time for any reason. Everything the user target has still remains after being absorbed. It's more like they are transferred to a different compartment within the user and not dead exactly.
Weakness: Number of targets absorbed at a time can just be two. The number of target living in the absorption compartment cannont be more than five. Either one target is ejected to let another come in.


I dont see any actual description as to how this jutsu works other than your 'absorbing' Seems kinda like the whole zetsu body thing mixed with some other shit. This also being said its more like your sealing something inside yourself which is again a fuinjutsu.


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12 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 6:05 pm

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Actually,I didn't intend that control jutsu for a storing jutsu. Just a re-directing jutsu. Like to take in the lightning and direct it out immediately.. (Kinda like when avatar redirected the firelord's lightning if you know what I mean).

Concerning the living dead, I would have loved much description but it's much like the body entering into me and staying in a compartment( something like orochimaru's oral rebirth place shit) and then targets could be ejected.. (More like when kabuto used tayuya, jirobo, out of his body when he was under sage mode) but this is a kinjutsu and it's only used for dead bodies so any other questions?


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13 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:06 pm

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Hell nah. Your jutsu says on eye contact. Also doesnt say person needs to be dead. Dead people cant make eye contact. Also, Kinjutsu isnt a CS catergory. This would be fuinjutsu without a doubt. I'd like you to go read the fuinjutsu spec and tell me whats wrong here.


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14 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:13 pm

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Ok. Little steps.

It doesn't require eye contact. No way it gonna be eye contact cos even kamui aint eye contact.
Re-wording it, I would say, placing hands on the target and it stated in the weakness that it can only be used on dead targets.
Actually, I just thought about when kabuto manifested tayuya, jirobo, kidomaru in his body. He did not need any fuinjutsu for that and also, orochimaru did not need any fuinjutsu when absorbing and storing up patients for his oral rebirth..so, where exactly does fuinjutsu come in? It's not like am sealing them.


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15 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:19 pm

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You are putting them into a smaller object, yourself. Thats fuinjutsu. Alsom\, Kabuto and Orochimaru clearly have advanced use of Fuinjutsu so how would you know they didnt need fuinjutsu to do it?


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16 Re: MINES[jutsu] on Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:30 pm

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Kabuto was never recoreded to have fuinjutsu. He manifested them through sage mode. Orochimaru did have fuinjutsu.
Anyways, I'll let it be. Most of my ideas are just way above my head.


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