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It's been five generations after the first war between Samurai and Shinobi. The five villages were founded shortly after and there has never been a war between them. Until now, all five villages have been off limits to the outside world, however the gates have been opened and ninja were allowed to travel between. But suddenly, kage are falling ill and no one knows who's behind it. The Hokage and Raikage both lie in comatose state, awaiting an answer as to what put them there.
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1Lil pup Empty Lil pup Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:55 pm

Kidbushido

Kidbushido

Ehhhhhh, Approved. This clan has a lot, so if another member of staff has a problem speak up.

2Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:57 pm

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

Unapproved, you haven't listed specifics, such as your CP increase...

Be reasonable, or remove it entirely. Same with the boosts in water.

3Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Sun Jan 11, 2015 3:14 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

Alright Bump

4Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:02 pm

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Anonymous
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-Chakra Pool Increased 20%
-Sensory [Vision/Smell/Sound]
-Faster Movement Underwater taijutsu adept Speed
-Blue Skin
-Gils [Breath Underwater]

Alright, I'm grading this based on a Curve of Kokai, and Uzumaki, as well as the character Kisame
I would rather see a static boost of "X Amount of Charka" rather than a percent. As Uzumaki should, and will continue to have more. (Considering that he fed off SAmehada, as well as the sword feeding off him)

For sensory, you need to be specific, as well as the increase in Tai speed.

All of this is normally okay, but stacking it all in one thing.. is a but much. If you removed the Sensory (It's really easy to train anyways...) and just said that speed is increased by 1 Tier of Tai in water... you should be fine.

As for the Chakra boost, I personally would think +80, or 15% boost will be fine, unless you can contest this, and provide a reason why this would be relatively on par with the Uzumaki clan.

5Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:04 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

New Clan

6Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:05 pm

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

no, You will not get a discount for buying puppets.

If it's a puppet clan, you don't get Buki.

7Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:11 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

K what about now

8Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:12 pm

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

You need to choose.

Poison, or puppetry.

If you use poison in puppets, that's in description, as a common thing you all do. You're trying to create a Poison Release Clan PLUS Puppet Clan.

Make your choice.

9Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:30 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

What about now~

10Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:33 pm

Guest

Anonymous
Guest

15% off what techs? training CP cost?

and remove the KKG completely. That's not your skill, that's Kugu kill. All you're getting is Perks with this.

11Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:39 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

.

12Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:41 pm

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Anonymous
Guest

uh...

I only meant the art for the last two sections... and you were good, now its empty... so what is this?

13Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:43 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

To late

14Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:44 pm

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Anonymous
Guest

Then there's no point in approving this, You just give yourself the last name, and put this in your histoy if you aren't going to get perks.

15Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:32 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

Bump

16Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:34 pm

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Anonymous
Guest

Ningyō wrote:Lil pup Jutsu11
Clan Name: The Chikamatsu clan (近松一族, Chikamatsu Ichizoku)
Clan Unique Features:

  • +1 Kugutsu
  • 10% Chakra Pool Increased

Clan History:
Spoiler:
Clan Members:

  • -Hikaru, Chikamatsu



Lil pup Kekki10
KKG Name: Ningyō
KKG Description: This clan is a Kugutsu base clan. They have been crafting puppets for years. And some puppets can trap there targets for until they can break out.

Lil pup Jutsu12

everything below that line, delete. You can get perks, without a KKG.

Also state that the "+1" is in the tier. As it's vague (even though I knoew it sounds stupid)

edit, and you should be good.

17Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:26 am

Kidbushido

Kidbushido

Well this clan isn't at all boring. Approved I guess.

18Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:56 am

K

K
Kiri Jonin
Kiri Jonin

Edits were not made, unapproved.

19Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:29 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

Bump

20Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:33 pm

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Anonymous
Guest

Ningyō wrote:Lil pup Jutsu11
Clan Name: The Chikamatsu clan (近松一族, Chikamatsu Ichizoku)
Clan Unique Features:

  • +1 Kugutsu Cs Note that this will bring A2 to A3, but A3 will not reach M1.
  • 10% Chakra Pool Increased

Clan History:
Spoiler:
Keep in mind all puppets will have to be made, even if they were "passed down"
Clan Members:

  • -Hikaru, Chikamatsu



Everything below this line can be removed. It serves no purpose as your KKG actually has no stats or abilities.
Lil pup Kekki10
KKG Name: Ningyō
KKG Description: This clan is a Kugutsu base clan. They have been crafting puppets for years. Also train in the art of medical ninjutsu, being good Medics they still lack the true ability of being top notch medics.

Lil pup Jutsu12

21Lil pup Empty Re: Lil pup Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:50 pm

Ningyō

Ningyō

Alright there

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