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1 Lil pup on Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:55 pm

Ehhhhhh, Approved. This clan has a lot, so if another member of staff has a problem speak up.


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2 Re: Lil pup on Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:57 pm

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Unapproved, you haven't listed specifics, such as your CP increase...

Be reasonable, or remove it entirely. Same with the boosts in water.

3 Re: Lil pup on Sun Jan 11, 2015 3:14 pm

Alright Bump


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4 Re: Lil pup on Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:02 pm

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-Chakra Pool Increased 20%
-Sensory [Vision/Smell/Sound]
-Faster Movement Underwater taijutsu adept Speed
-Blue Skin
-Gils [Breath Underwater]

Alright, I'm grading this based on a Curve of Kokai, and Uzumaki, as well as the character Kisame
I would rather see a static boost of "X Amount of Charka" rather than a percent. As Uzumaki should, and will continue to have more. (Considering that he fed off SAmehada, as well as the sword feeding off him)

For sensory, you need to be specific, as well as the increase in Tai speed.

All of this is normally okay, but stacking it all in one thing.. is a but much. If you removed the Sensory (It's really easy to train anyways...) and just said that speed is increased by 1 Tier of Tai in water... you should be fine.

As for the Chakra boost, I personally would think +80, or 15% boost will be fine, unless you can contest this, and provide a reason why this would be relatively on par with the Uzumaki clan.

5 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:04 pm

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6 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:05 pm

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no, You will not get a discount for buying puppets.

If it's a puppet clan, you don't get Buki.

7 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:11 pm

K what about now


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8 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:12 pm

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You need to choose.

Poison, or puppetry.

If you use poison in puppets, that's in description, as a common thing you all do. You're trying to create a Poison Release Clan PLUS Puppet Clan.

Make your choice.

9 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:30 pm

What about now~


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10 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:33 pm

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15% off what techs? training CP cost?

and remove the KKG completely. That's not your skill, that's Kugu kill. All you're getting is Perks with this.

11 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:39 pm

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12 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:41 pm

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uh...

I only meant the art for the last two sections... and you were good, now its empty... so what is this?

13 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:43 pm

To late


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14 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 8:44 pm

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Then there's no point in approving this, You just give yourself the last name, and put this in your histoy if you aren't going to get perks.

15 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:32 pm

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16 Re: Lil pup on Mon Jan 12, 2015 11:34 pm

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Ningyō wrote:
Clan Name: The Chikamatsu clan (近松一族, Chikamatsu Ichizoku)
Clan Unique Features:

  • +1 Kugutsu
  • 10% Chakra Pool Increased

Clan History:
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This clan appeared in the Land of Wind over two hundred years ago, when the concept of the hidden ninja villages wasn't explored yet, when the shinobi around the world were hired to protect the Daimiyos and waged wars against each other. In the desertic Land of Wind, a shinobi named Monzaemon Chikamatsu (近松モンザエモン, Chikamatsu Monzaemon), born exactly 347 years previous, was already a famous puppeteer, but still only using his prized puppets to entretain. Seeing how other tools were being used as weapons, like the Cloth Binding Technique, he decided to create battle puppets. In this intent, he created the famous Chikamatsu Collection of Ten Puppets (十機近松の集, Jiki Chikamatsu no Shū). Eventually, these puppets were passed from generation to generation, as his clan continued grow old. This clan went to be known as The Clan That Can Take out an Entire Castle (全体の城を取ることができる一族, Zentai no Shiro wo Toru Kotogadeikiru Ichizoku), and many tried to steal their secrets.
Clan Members:

  • -Hikaru, Chikamatsu




KKG Name: Ningyō
KKG Description: This clan is a Kugutsu base clan. They have been crafting puppets for years. And some puppets can trap there targets for until they can break out.


everything below that line, delete. You can get perks, without a KKG.

Also state that the "+1" is in the tier. As it's vague (even though I knoew it sounds stupid)

edit, and you should be good.

17 Re: Lil pup on Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:26 am

Well this clan isn't at all boring. Approved I guess.


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18 Re: Lil pup on Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:56 am

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Edits were not made, unapproved.


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19 Re: Lil pup on Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:29 pm

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20 Re: Lil pup on Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:33 pm

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Ningyō wrote:
Clan Name: The Chikamatsu clan (近松一族, Chikamatsu Ichizoku)
Clan Unique Features:

  • +1 Kugutsu Cs Note that this will bring A2 to A3, but A3 will not reach M1.
  • 10% Chakra Pool Increased

Clan History:
Spoiler:

This clan appeared in the Land of Wind over two hundred years ago, when the concept of the hidden ninja villages wasn't explored yet, when the shinobi around the world were hired to protect the Daimiyos and waged wars against each other. In the desertic Land of Wind, a shinobi named Monzaemon Chikamatsu (近松モンザエモン, Chikamatsu Monzaemon), born exactly 347 years previous, was already a famous puppeteer, but still only using his prized puppets to entretain. Seeing how other tools were being used as weapons, like the Cloth Binding Technique, he decided to create battle puppets. In this intent, he created the famous Chikamatsu Collection of Ten Puppets (十機近松の集, Jiki Chikamatsu no Shū). Eventually, these puppets were passed from generation to generation, as his clan continued grow old. This clan went to be known as The Clan That Can Take out an Entire Castle (全体の城を取ることができる一族, Zentai no Shiro wo Toru Kotogadeikiru Ichizoku), and many tried to steal their secrets.
Keep in mind all puppets will have to be made, even if they were "passed down"
Clan Members:

  • -Hikaru, Chikamatsu



Everything below this line can be removed. It serves no purpose as your KKG actually has no stats or abilities.

KKG Name: Ningyō
KKG Description: This clan is a Kugutsu base clan. They have been crafting puppets for years. Also train in the art of medical ninjutsu, being good Medics they still lack the true ability of being top notch medics.

21 Re: Lil pup on Sun Jan 18, 2015 9:50 pm

Alright there


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